Opening scene filmed in the same way as the opening for Zombieland:
WESTDALE MID-DAY. CAMERA IS FOCUSED ON FLAG FLYING OUTSIDE.
“O CANADA” IS PLAYING IN BACKGROUND.
Narrator: Oh, Canada, I wish I
could tell you that this was still
CAMERA DRAWS BACK TO SHOW FRONT ENTRANCE OF SCHOOL, THEN
MOVES TOWARDS THE DOOR.
but I’ve come to realize you can’t
have a school without rules
CAMERA GOES SHAKY AS IF HAND-HELD IN FIRST PERSON POV, AS IF
CAMERA IS THE AUDIENCE AS A PERSON, MOVES TOWARDS THE DOOR
OF SCHOOL AND GOES INSIDE, SMOKE FILLS THE HALL,WALLS ARE
FULL OF GRAFFITI, GARBAGE STREWN ON FLOOR, KIDS MILLING
AROUND, SMOKING, WEARING CHAINS, GLARING AT CAMERA AS IT
MOVES DOWN HALLWAY, A COUPLE IS NECKING IN THE CORNER,
ANOTHER IS ARGUING. THIS IS A PIVOTAL SCENE SHOWING WHAT THE
SCHOOL WOULD LOOK LIKE IF THERE WERE NO RULES.
and there are no rules at Westdale.
SOMEONE RUSHES PAST AND OUT THE DOOR BEHIND CAMERA. SOMEONE
ELSE COMES SCREAMING DOWN THE HALL IN HOT PURSUIT.
No my friends this is now the end
of days – my days – teenage style.
CAMERA CONTINUES DOWN HALL, NARRATOR OPENS A STAIRWELL DOOR
– IT IS PUSHED VIOLENTLY BACK AS A BIG MALE STUDENT IS
BLOCKING ENTRANCE, WHILE HIS FRIENDS BEHIND HIM ROUGH UP
It’s amazing how quickly things can
go from bad to total apocalypse.
CONTINUE DOWN HALL, A STRETCHER GOES PAST WITH A BRUISED
FEMALE MOANING ON IT. A COP HURRIES PAST AND CONTINUES DOWN
THE OTHER HALLWAY. ANOTHER COP WITH A STUDENT IN HANDCUFFS
And why did this happen? Well, it
all started out innocently enough –
with attendance. Students wanted to
be able to sign themselves out of
class and write their own excuses.
Man Oh man, did that open up a
whole new can of worms.
CAMERA SHOWS A COUPLE OF ANGRY, TOUGH LOOKING BOYS COMING
TOWARDS OUR NARRATOR AS HE MOVES DOWN THE SCHOOL HALLWAY
THE TOUGH GUYS BEGINS TO PICK UP SPEED AND CHASE OUR
NARRATOR DOWN THE HALL AROUND THE CORNER AND UP THE STAIRS.
OUR NARRATOR SPRINTS WITH NO PROBLEM UP THE STAIRS, BUT THE
ASSAILANTS GET WINDED AND STOP TO CATCH THEIR BREATH.
OUR NARRATOR GOES OUT OF THE STAIRWELL AND INTO THE 3RD
FLOOR HALLWAY. WALKS DOWN THE HALL, PASSING KIDS ALONG THE
WAY, SOME WALKING CONFIDENTLY WITH INAPPROPRIATE SLOGANS –
“I LOVE BEER” OR I HATE YOU ON THEIR SHIRTS, DODGES A
SKATEBOARDER, SOME COWER FURTIVELY PAST AND DUCK INTO A
CLASSROOM, A COUPLE IS NECKING IN THE CORNER.
When you don’t have to go to class,
why bother? Imagine the fun you can
have just hanging with your
SHOT OF NARRATOR HANDING OVER HIS LUNCH AND MONEY TO A
COUPLE OF THUGS IN THE HALL. THEY ARE CARRYING CHAINS AND
HAVE A BOTTLE OF BEER IN THEIR BACK POCKET. ONE IS
DISTRACTED BY USING A LASER POINTER TO HARASS A GIRL ACROSS
THE HALL. NARRATOR SPIES THE THUGS THAT WERE CHASING HIM
DASHES INTO THE ELEVATOR AS IT OPENS FOR A CARETAKER HE
BOUNCES OFF THE BACK WALL OF THE ELEVATOR. CARETAKER LOOKS
TIRED AND ANXIOUS, HE CARRIES A BASEBALL BAT ON HIS
TROLLEY. HE WANTS TO KICK OUT THE NARRATOR, BUT THE DOORS
CLOSE JUST AS THE THUGS SLAM INTO THE DOOR.
CARETAKER AND NARRATOR SIZE ONE ANOTHER UP. SINCE OUR
NARRATOR LOOKS LIKE A “LOSER” IN THIS NEW PARADIGM, THE
CARETAKER BECOMES RELAXED. THE ELEVATOR MOVES UP THE FLOORS.
Caretaker: Looks like you could use
a hand up.
Narrator: yah, can’t remember the
last time I was able to eat my own
lunch. What is wrong with these
Caretaker: It all starts with
They show respect for the school by
not throwing garbage around, in
fact, picking it up! by not
tagging, by not breaking windows,
this means that you give a damn
about your school and are proud to
be a Warrior
SHOTS OF STUDENTS PICKING UP GARBAGE, PUTTING THEIR GARBAGE
INTO TRASH CANS, COLLECTING RECYCLABLES, CHANGING THEIR MIND
ABOUT GRAFFITI, STOPPING A STUDENT FROM BREAKING WINDOW,
GETTING SMALLER KIDS TO
When kids have respect for
themselves and their education –
the sky is the limit.
SHOT OF STUDENTS IN CLASS DOING COOL STUFF, WALKING UP TO
GET THEIR DIPLOMA, AT UNIVERSITY,ON VARIOUS JOB LOCATIONS IN
PARTS OF THE WORLD (IF POSSIBLE)
When they respect themselves, they
respect others – the entire world
is a better place
SHOT OF STUDENTS HELPING ONE ANOTHER – TUTORING, MENTORING,
BREAKING UP A FIGHT, PUTTING THEIR CIGARETTE OUT, TAKING OFF
THEIR HATS, COACHING A BASKETBALL, ETC. SOME SHOTS OF
STUDENTS HELPING THE PLANET – RAISING FUNDS FOR VARIOUS
CAUSES – WORKING IN THE COMMUNITY WITH YOUNG KIDS, WITH OLD
FOLKS, RAKING LAWNS, WORKING ETC.
Narrator: and isn’t that what it is
all about? A better life for us,
for our community, for our planet?
LAST SHOT OF ALL STUDENTS LAUGHING BEING TOGETHER THEN
CAMERA GOES OUT FOR A REALLY LONG SHOT OF KIDS & SCHOOL,THEN
WESTDALE COMMUNITY, THEN HAMILTON, THEN THE WORLD AS IT
THE KID WITH THE DUBSTEP POWERS
Class has just ended and tim makes his way to his locker and
rushes home. On his way out of school he sees the girl he
likes and talks to her for a moment before heading out.
TIM: HEY CATHERINE
CATHERINE: HEY TIM WHAT ARE YOU DOING
THIS WEEKEND MAYBE WE COULD MEET UP
Tim seems to be anxious and
repeatedly looks back down the hall
to see if the John(a bully) that
wanted to bash his face in was
TIM: UHHG CATHERINE I HAVE TO GO I’LL
CALL YOU LATER! ( TIM RUNS OUT OF THE DOOR)
JOHN: THERE HE IS, GET HIM BOYS!
(John and his group of guys start
chasing Tim out of the school)
John and his guys push Catherine out of the way and she
follows the guys to see if Tim will be alright.
JOHN: THERE HE IS BOYS LETS CORNER HIM!
John and the guys catch up to him and corner Tim in the
school yard and start beating him up!
CATHERINE: COME ON TIM! DONT LET THEM DO
THAT TOO YOU!!
Tim pushes two of the boys off of him and catches his
breath. He slowly roles up his sleeves looking down at the
ground and calmly lifts his head while heavily breathing and
groaning. The two boys shocked and raged charge at him.
Tim charges back at the boys and with some magical force
throws the 2 bullies who now looked like fool down to the
A few other kids that were standing a 2 feet away with John
attack. Tim doges one and blasts the other and makes his way
to be one on one with John and looks at him in the eyes and
TIM: NEVER MESS WITH ME AGAIN JOHN
Tim gathers the rest of his energy left and blasts John, Tim
who has used up most of his energy runs away from the
incident and glipses at Catherine while passing by. Once far
enough Tim slows down and passes out.
SCENE 2 (REVEALING THE TRUTH)
(3 years later) (present)
Tim has been on the run for 3 years and he is now an
international wanted man, the same guy (John) has been
tracking him and hunting him for 3 years.
Guys are lined up behind John in trentch coats and shades.
They all charge at him and a fight breaks out!
Tim in on his knees bleeding.
JOHN: FINALLY I CAN GET MY REVENGE ITS
BEEN TOO LONG TIMMOTHY
John steps closer and slaps
(ZOOM IN ON TIMS EYES SQUINTING)
(close up on Tims hands)
Tim: take this bastard
(raises hands but no powers are performed)
turn to John holding a rock John: I found your kryptonite
Timmy Boy. whadya gat now. ahaha, ahaha ah aha-BANG.
John falls to reveal Cathrine holding a baseball bat.
Cathrine: let’s go
they run into the sunset and End come over the screen,
momentarily after Johns friends enter the shot chasing after
BOY SITTING AT LAPTOP LATE AT NIGHT THINKING TEENAGE BOY WEARING NORMAL CLOTHES AND GLASSES SITTING AT LAPTOP THINKING HARD ABOUT IDEAS GETTING FRUSTRATED Pacing back and forth in kitchen Sits back down at laptop only to get up Pacing around living room Lying in awkward position on chair Looks at clock sees the time is 3:02am "I think its time for bed" he says Gets up and walks down hall into bedroom. As he leaves room he turns around and runs back to his laptop and quickly starts new story Starts typing into script "A man is working hard late into the night. He looks at the clock and see’s its 3:02am and he decides to go to bed, as he goes to bed he thinks he see’s something. When he realizes there’s nothing there he walks away only to show there is a figure in the window." He looks at the screen and has a sigh of relife, seeming satified he looks back at the clock and sees the time still reads 3:02am Looking puzzled he puts his glasses on to closely read the clock and sees it acually says 3:46am Surprised it has gotten so late he gets up and walks off to bed As he walks away there is a figure in the window SAME BOY IS IN TOWN WITH HIS FRIEND GOING TO GET COFFEE Boy and his friend sit down at coffee place Friend: So Mr.Director hows that new job at Flaramount Pictures? (MORE) (CONTINUED) CONTINUED: 2. Boy: Oh yeah.. its pretty good, they have me working on this suspense short film and I’m having trouble with it Friend: Oh yeah? what do you have so far? Boy: Right now all I have is a writer who is stumped on a story, and gets creeped out easily. Friend: Haha! Sounds more like a diary than a short film Boy: yeah really thats what I am starting to think, I’ve been having these weird feelings lately and I dont know why. Friend: oh I see your story is so scary its even scaring its writer! ahah! why dont you just ask for a different assingment Boy: Oh I dont think its my story, just been watching lots of horror films for some insiration. No luck though. Friend: Mabye lay off the scary movies man. ask for a different assingment, after all you dont often make horror flicks Boy: Yeah but I’ve been through so many jabs I need to keep this one Friend keeps talking about his job at an advertising group, but boy zones out staring at a figure standing down the street Friend: Nate! are you even listening? Boy: What? oh yeah, thats cool stuff man Friend: Man! Your not even listening! Boy: Yeah man I acually have to go 3. Boy gets up still looking down the street and walks off down the street quickly looking back every few steps BOY IS BACK AT HOME SITTING DOWN AT DESK WITH FRESH CUP OF COFFEE LOOKING AT HIS COMPUTER SCREEN He is intently reading over his script SHOWS SCRIPT ON COMPUTER SCREEN He is reading through the script fast as if it is some new story SHOWS SCRIPT ON SCREEN DISCRIBING ALMOST EXACTLY WHAT HAPPEND TO HIM EARLIER IN THE DAY He slowly picks up is phone barely taking his eyes off of his computer He is on the phone taking sounding very worried Boy: Man were you home today at all? FRIEND FROM EARLIER SITTING IN AN OFFICE. OFFICE NOISE IN THE BACKGROUND Friend (sounding confused): Yes I stopped by on my break to pick up the mail I was expecting a letter Boy: Did you touch my computer? Friend: No man I just got the mail and left why? Boy: There is a scene, on my script, and I dont remember writing it! Friend: Ok man chill out. Obviously youve been working to hard. Take a nap or something Boy: Yeah ok a nap Boy notices something on the counter and slowly moves towards it Friend (Heard through the phone): Oh yeah man and there is a letter there for you. It was on the door step. Boy picks up letter and looks at the handwritten name and adress and slowly and nervously opens it (CONTINUED) CONTINUED: 4. The letter contains a small folded peice of paper The boy slowly takes out the piece of paper and opens it "457-2991" Boy (Under his breath): What the... Boy picks up phone and dials number Phone rings for a bit then goes to busy signal Boy: Hum thats interesting, oh well Boy sits back down at computer Begins to type working on his script "The man recieved a letter, he slowly opened the letter to find only a phone number. Curious he calls the number, only to get a busy signal. He calls the phone again. This time someone answers, its a girl sounds like shes in her teens. She says hello a couple times before he gets the courage to say hello back..." Boy hears girls voice saying hello through a phone He stands up and looks at the phone to see its off the hook He grabs the phone looking very confused and answers Boy: Hello. Girl: Hello? Who are you? Boy: I was about to ask that I believe you left my number at my doorstep. Girl: Oh thats right I did! I heard you were a writer and well I want to be a writer but I need some advice. Boy: Oh yeah? what do you need to know? There is no response just a busy signal again Boy holds phone away from ear and looks confused, he hangs up the phone and goes over to the coffee maker to pour another cup 5. He goes back to his desk, taking a sip of his coffee and as he looks at his computer screen he gets startled and spits his coffee out BOY IS WALKING IN A PARKING LOT WITH HIS FRIEND TO HIS FRIENDS CAR Boy: I’m telling you everytime I write something in this story it happens. Its like Im writing my life. Friend: Sounds like someone is a little paranoid. Boy: No seriously, I wrote about that letter I got, with the phone number, then I wrote about a girl answering and it happend, and then after I talked to her. Our conversation was on my script! Friend: Man your going crazy, I think your drinking a little too much coffee and worrying too much about this script of yours. Mabye you should take a break. Boy: But this is too weird I dont know what to do Friend: Well if I was you, and it botherd me that much. I would end the story, kill off the charactor or something. Boy: Yeah... Yeah that’ll work thanks Boy leaves parking lot and his friend gets in car. BOY IS SITTING AT BUS STOP TYPING ON HIS LAPTOP COMPLETELY FOCUSED Shows boy typing on his laptop and messages fade through the screen Looks up and beside him Friend sitting there but blood is coming out of his eyes Boy: Bryson? What the hell happend? (MORE) (CONTINUED) CONTINUED: 6. Friend: You have to die its the end of the story Friend Pulls blunt object (or any weapon) Boy: Bryson what are you doing Boy gets up without taking eyes of friend, is about to run Friend: You have to end the story it cant go on, you have to kill off the charactor Boy: But I did he dies, he is hit by the bus Friend: Well it has to happen then Friend runs at boy as if attacking Boy runs away Friend chases boy through the town until he crosses the street without looking and a bus hits him Friend runs up to body Friend: The story had to ending. Every story needs an ending Friend gives a creepy smile, then other people gather around. FADE TO BLACK
This is my first screen play.. with my weak grammar.
It’s pretty short screen play, but enjoy it 🙂
There are 2 guys, Josh and Daniel. Josh and Daniel are really smart. But Josh was always first one and Daniel was always second one. One day, Daniel gets the highest mark in his school and Josh gets second mark. Josh gets mad because he does not get the highest mark.
Teacher: Here’s your mark guys. Daniel, you did great job this time!
Josh: What was just happened? Oh My God. I’m not the highest one?
Daniel: I won this time, Josh. You better give up.
Josh: It shouldn’t be happened! It’s because of you! Daniel, you should disappear in this world.
Josh kills Daniel because he did not get the highest mark. Josh starts to be crazy. He isn’t normal. He is crazy.
Teacher: Is everyone here?
Students: Josh and Daniel are away.
Teacher: They went to washroom 20 minutes ago. John, Go and check it.
So John goes to washroom to check them.
John goes into the washroom and sees Daniel’s corp and gets shocked. Suddenly, there is an announcement.
Announcement: LOCK DOWN! EVERYONE LOCK DOWN!
John was frozen and did not know what to do. He locked the washroom door.
Announcement: Code Green!
John thinks it is not dangerous anymore. John goes back to the class and sees classmates’ corps. John tries to call the police and escape the school, but there is no signal in school and all the doors were closed.
John: I have to escape this place.
Suddenly, Daniel appears.
Daniel: You are the last one, John.
John: How can you do that to people?
Daniel: If I cannot be the first place, I will kill everyone instead of being a loser.
John: You cannot be the first place. Killing people does not make you first place. But the only way you can be successful is trying hard, not killing your rival.
Daniel: So you are saying that I did not try hard? Is that why I’m not the best one? Then I will just kill myself. That will make it better, right?
Daniel kills himself.
John: Daniel… You are an unfortunate one. I’ll miss you… forever..